Paragraph Analysis

Westfall, Greg. "Bored Girl". 10/3/2009 via wikimedia commons.  creative commons license

I did a paragraph analysis of my QRG and commented on how well each paragraph accomplished the following guidelines:

• focuses on a main point (RfW 4a)
• develops the main point (RfW 4b)
• organizes itself internally (RfW 4c)
• links ideas coherently (RfW 4d)
• provides smooth transitions (RfW 4d)

I learned that in general my paragraphs are pretty well-developed, but there were times where I could've had smoother transitions between ideas within the paragraph, or transitions between paragraphs. I also noticed places where I didn't conduct a full analysis of quotes or social media posts, and transitioned abruptly to the next paragraph. There was one paragraph that I thought could be broken into two for easier reading.