I'd like feedback on the organizational structure: is it intuitive? Do you have any suggestions for better ways to organize the information?
Also, does the historical example at the beginning add value or detract value from the piece?
Please feel free to give me any feedback you want! Below is a link to the draft
https://docs.google.com/document/d/10G40FAKk-RZoGvKp77uO_cDJMyoHjRJf2C2TzBV2czg/edit?usp=sharing
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Important note: After revising the draft for step 4.4 I added correct hyperlinks for citation. I still don't have any pictures in the draft. This is intentional because I can't figure out how to add captions for citation in google docs. I will add photos for my final draft on this blog!
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