Draft of Public Argument

Here is the rough draft of project 3. The thing that I struggle with the most in writing this is that the formate that I'm writing in is very informal: it's essentially a blog post. I want to make sure that I'm constructing an effective argument while still adhering to the informal, narrative-style of the Tuesday Night Bouldering weekly column. So, as you read my draft, please let me know how you think I could've done this better or differently. Thanks!

Webb, Michaela "morning in Bishop" 2014